You already know the basic rules for subject lines from the Email Marketing Basics course. You know a subject line should be short, specific and truthful. Now we will go deeper. We will look at specific types of subject lines that have proven themselves over time, at how the subject line sets the recipient's expectations, and at the preheader as a standalone tool with rules of its own. At the end, we will show you how to verify your chosen variant instead of guessing.
Eight ways to build a subject line
When you don't know where to start, pick one of these proven types and write three variants based on it:
- A question. "How much is an unopened email costing you?" A question makes people look for the answer. Always make sure the email actually delivers it.
- Starting with "How". It points straight to a how-to. "How to cut campaign prep down to half an hour."
- Controversy. A contrarian take on a topic your recipients care about. People want to get to the bottom of things.
- A plain description of what it is. A straightforward message works brilliantly where recipients already know you. "New templates for spring campaigns."
- Numbers. They are easy to remember and promise a clear overview. Headlines with numbers are not on magazine covers by accident.
- Curiosity. A hint that doesn't give everything away. It takes creativity and an honest payoff inside the email.
- Urgency. Urgency is just your wish until you tie it to a specific deadline and to what the person gains.
- Money and familiar names. A specific amount or a name the recipient knows attracts attention reliably.
You don't have to invent from scratch. Go through your own inbox and write down the subject lines that made you open an email. You will quickly see which types work on your target audience.
The subject line sets expectations
People use the subject line to set their expectations of what they will find inside. You know the feeling from the cinema: you went because of a great trailer and an hour in you realized the trailer was the best part of the whole film. That is exactly how an email feels when its subject line promises more than the content delivers.
This leads to a rule that is often forgotten. The subject line must not be the most interesting thing about the entire email. If you manipulate someone into opening and they end up feeling disappointed, they won't open your next email. Because your real job is not getting this campaign opened, it is getting the next one opened.
A simple test helps too. Read the subject line through the recipient's eyes and ask: "Is there anything in it for me?" If the subject line doesn't answer, rewrite it.
The preheader has rules of its own
The preheader, the email's snippet text, is not a second copy of the subject line. Quanda gives it a 50 character limit so it displays correctly across different email clients. Use it like this:
- Summarize or clarify the content. If your subject line talks about a spring sale, use the preheader to say which products it covers.
- Finish the thought the subject line opened. They appear next to or below each other, so they work as one sentence.
- Place your first call to action here, for example "read more" or "find out more".
- Try humor, a symbol or a personal tone. The preheader can take more than the subject line because it is less exposed.
- Mention a specific link from the email so the reader knows what to look for inside.
Verify it with an A/B test
Instead of guessing, use a campaign with A/B testing. You create an email, copy it, and in version B change only the subject line. Everything else stays the same. You pick a test group of recipients and choose open rate as the criterion, because that is exactly what the subject line influences.
Quanda then sends both versions to randomly selected groups, evaluates the winner after a set time, and sends the more successful variant to the remaining recipients. After a few tests like this, you will know which words work on your audience. That is information no generic handbook can give you.